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Apr. 9th, 2005 11:32 pmThat X series body-switching fic I posted a bit of a week ago now has a beginning!
Rated PG because...um...because it feels like it should be something higher than a G. Yeah. >_>
( Was this what humans called an 'out of body experience'? )
The next morning can be found here. There will be something else in between this beginning bit I just posted and that, however.
Constructive criticism is very welcome. I'm not quite confident about my computerese-writing skills, and I don't think this flows as well as the other bit I've written so far. I've never tried third person limited Zero POV before, either. Any feedback on that or any other elements would be awesome.
Rated PG because...um...because it feels like it should be something higher than a G. Yeah. >_>
( Was this what humans called an 'out of body experience'? )
The next morning can be found here. There will be something else in between this beginning bit I just posted and that, however.
Constructive criticism is very welcome. I'm not quite confident about my computerese-writing skills, and I don't think this flows as well as the other bit I've written so far. I've never tried third person limited Zero POV before, either. Any feedback on that or any other elements would be awesome.
