After re-reading it a few times, I decided that I still was bugged by some of the massive overdose of OCs (OCOD?) in "So You Want to be a Maverick Hunter". So I rewrote it. Now with more Zero, fewer OCs, and large chunks of dialogue plunked down in a different setting. Sister sibling says she liked the original better, but I feel better about this one.
( So You Want to be a Maverick Hunter, Take 2 )
( So You Want to be a Maverick Hunter, Take 2 )